100 word challenge
February 25, 2022
“Hello, I’m here to book a flight for Paris!” Presley yelled excitedly “yeah we need to book a flight for two seats.” said Prezley “okay, can I check your passport” he said in a polite voice. “yeah sure, do you need to see both?” they both whispered at the same time “yeah, but why are you whispering?” he said “we have a hobbit of whispering” they both explain “that’s a 2000 dollars
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Hello! You chose a very appropriate conversation to utilise the challenge phrase. The whispering added a little bit of interest to the story. You are well on the way to using conversation correctly but maybe a bit more polish to the punctuation is needed. It would be lovely to be booking a ticket to Paris. I think you were clever too, in using different language for the seller of the tickets to the buyers of the tickets. Well done.